It's all right, I can tell what you are saying, and actually most of the problems are just the flipping of words and use of different verbs. Your spelling isn't too off and to tell you the truth, I've met way too many people on the Internet that speak English but can't even get close to spelling any...
It's looking very good so far. I know you have a thing for tall stacks, but I think from my point of view the funnels would look better if they were a tad bit shorter.
Fixed. Thanks for the critique, it's much appreciated since usually my drawings go unnoticed in the forums making it much harder to realize my mistakes and solve them.
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