|Novice wrote: *||March 24th, 2017, 11:38 pm|
Nice effort, but your ship lacks some shading, which makes her look too flat.
Also I think your railings are too dark.
I can't see where those large squares, on the lower superstructure came from. I also think that two sloping lines, at the superstructure edge, could be made more smooth, and not as they are now, stepped.
Also look at her pictures again, to refine the details and again use some shading.
More shading. Got it. I'll smooth the superstructure and change the railings too.