Ok, just making sure
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| Author: | ALVAMA [ August 9th, 2010, 5:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dante Alighieri, the first Italian dreadnought |
ezgo394, no credits needed, indeed what Ace said |
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| Author: | ezgo394 [ August 9th, 2010, 5:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dante Alighieri, the first Italian dreadnought |
Ok, just making sure .
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| Author: | acelanceloet [ September 3rd, 2010, 2:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dante Alighieri, the first Italian dreadnought |
I hope the dante is now really finished. please comment on it if it's not. |
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| Author: | Thiel [ September 3rd, 2010, 2:23 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dante Alighieri, the first Italian dreadnought |
There's a few things on the second drawing that looks like leftovers from an earlier version. Starting from the bow: There's an odd black thing just in front of the midship lifeboat, there's a thing that looks like a boat between the aft stacks and the third gun from the bow. It lacks a bit of outline and should be visible through the railings. The stern-most lifeboats looks like it has two very davits floating in the air next to it. And there's an error in the "title" |
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| Author: | acelanceloet [ September 3rd, 2010, 2:29 pm ] | |
| Post subject: | Re: Dante Alighieri, the first Italian dreadnought | |
There's a few things on the second drawing that looks like leftovers from an earlier version.
indeed, you are right, there is an layer on which should be deleted underneath it... I will fix it immediately.Starting from the bow: There's an odd black thing just in front of the midship lifeboat, there's a thing that looks like a boat between the aft stacks and the third gun from the bow. It lacks a bit of outline and should be visible through the railings. The stern-most lifeboats looks like it has two very davits floating in the air next to it. And there's an error in the "title" EDIT: fixed 
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| Author: | Thiel [ September 3rd, 2010, 4:38 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dante Alighieri, the first Italian dreadnought |
You might want to touch up on the hull a little. The outline seems a bit shaky. Not as bad as the first version you posted, but it's still there. Also, the two small life boats could do with some work as well. |
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| Author: | ALVAMA [ September 3rd, 2010, 4:51 pm ] | |
| Post subject: | Re: Dante Alighieri, the first Italian dreadnought | |
You might want to touch up on the hull a little. The outline seems a bit shaky. Not as bad as the first version you posted, but it's still there.
The life boats are fine, they need to be like this!
Also, the two small life boats could do with some work as well. |
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| Author: | Lazer_one [ September 3rd, 2010, 5:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dante Alighieri, the first Italian dreadnought |
I'll try as soon as possible to post a profile that I recently found on an old book. Lazer_one |
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| Author: | paul_541 [ September 3rd, 2010, 7:11 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dante Alighieri, the first Italian dreadnought |
Good ameliorations !  Greetings.
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| Author: | Novice [ September 4th, 2010, 9:01 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Dante Alighieri, the first Italian dreadnought |
It certainly is a good improvment on your first try of that ship. |
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