One of the problems of drawing ships from the Springstyles book is that the superstructure of the ships are not represented there. So you will have to use contemporary ships to find the suitable superstructure. For a battleship designed in 1918, a Colorado/South Dakota-esqe superstructure is the only logical solution. According to my Friedmans US Battleships, this seem to be the case all the way to the early 30s.
Absolutel right. I was thinking along the lines of South Dakota given the modernesque sheer of the bow.
Here's what I have so far.
But as Heuhen pointed out Syzmo has already done it
Sorry Syzmo she's all yours