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Post subject: Alstom Metropolis C830/C830CPosted: June 27th, 2018, 7:23 am
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Post subject: Re: Alstom Metropolis C830/C830CPosted: July 1st, 2018, 7:44 am
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It looks like a nice start but I see some problems there.
Most importantly, there's a lot of double black lines: most notably on the doors and the equipment below the cabin.
Secondly, it seems to have no shading at all.

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Post subject: Re: Alstom Metropolis C830/C830CPosted: July 2nd, 2018, 2:56 pm
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The double lines on the doors were merely there to denote extra width, where three lines would be deemed too wide and one line too narrow. However, I can understand where you're coming from regarding the underfloor equipment, and the shading was definitely too subtle (only being on the bumpers).


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Post subject: Re: Alstom Metropolis C830/C830CPosted: July 3rd, 2018, 6:16 pm
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I'm afraid that 'double black line' thing isn't an optional matter. On the doors You have even 'triple black line' on top of it. :(

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