[Post Reply] [*]  Page 1 of 1  [ 5 posts ] 
Author Message
Schlemm138
Post subject: Schlemm's SB ship's..... So farPosted: August 17th, 2019, 3:32 pm
Offline
User avatar
Posts: 10
Joined: May 19th, 2019, 10:53 am
Location: Barnegat, NJ
All my current SB scale ship's that I was advised to place in the beginners forum. All you tallented folks can rip them apart. 😁

1. USA/real/naval aux.
[ img ]

2. USA/real/naval aux.
[ img ]

3. USA/real/naval aux.
[ img ]

4. USA/real/naval aux.
[ img ]

5. USA/real/amphibious warfare
[ img ]

6. USA/real/naval aux.
[ img ]

7. USA/real/naval aux.
[ img ]

8. USA/never-built/ampbib. warfare
[ img ]

9. USA/never-built/amphib. warfare
[ img ]

10. USA/real/naval aux.
[ img ]

_________________
A.K.A. Das_Schlemm
[ img ]


Top
[Profile] [Quote]
erik_t
Post subject: Re: Schlemm's SB ship's..... So farPosted: August 17th, 2019, 11:50 pm
Offline
Posts: 2738
Joined: July 26th, 2010, 11:38 pm
Location: Midwest US
Especially within the context of the beginner section, it would be helpful to know what you've changed. For example, the LHA-8 drawing is pretty busy. What comments should we be giving you, and what comments should we be giving the original author?


Top
[Profile] [Quote]
Schlemm138
Post subject: Re: Schlemm's SB ship's..... So farPosted: August 18th, 2019, 2:08 pm
Offline
User avatar
Posts: 10
Joined: May 19th, 2019, 10:53 am
Location: Barnegat, NJ
LHA-8 was given the new island design and the sponson forward of the island. Everything else was unchanged.

_________________
A.K.A. Das_Schlemm
[ img ]


Top
[Profile] [Quote]
Hood
Post subject: Re: Schlemm's SB ship's..... So farPosted: August 19th, 2019, 8:02 am
Offline
Posts: 6199
Joined: July 31st, 2010, 10:07 am
Welcome aboard.

These are very interesting additions.
Style wise the main points are; don't forget the shadow shading underneath all overhangs and platforms, all plaforms and overhanging decks should be 3 pixels thick (black-colour-black) and don't forget any small details (deck equipment etc.) that could reduce the empty appearance of some sections of these ships.
Also some of your drawings have a weird cut-off hull look. Generally in SB we either draw to the waterline (the black boot topping) or all of the underwater hull, a couple of your drawings are showing some underwater hull and upper rudders but then cut-off.

_________________
Hood's Worklist
English Electric Canberra FD
Interwar RN Capital Ships
Super-Darings
Never-Were British Aircraft


Top
[Profile] [Quote]
madmike
Post subject: Re: Schlemm's SB ship's..... So farPosted: August 22nd, 2019, 9:51 am
Offline
Posts: 131
Joined: August 2nd, 2010, 4:02 pm
Great work!

anyway, i think that Bougainville will incorporate the Enterprise Air Surveillance Radar (EASR) volume air search radar in lieu of the AN/SPS-48G air search radar


Top
[Profile] [Quote]
Display: Sort by: Direction:
[Post Reply]  Page 1 of 1  [ 5 posts ]  Return to “Beginners Only”

Jump to: 

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 1 guest


The team | Delete all board cookies | All times are UTC


cron
Powered by phpBB® Forum Software © phpBB Limited
[ GZIP: Off ]