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Biancini1995
Post subject: Future AU (Planning)Posted: August 21st, 2011, 6:10 pm
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By the time i don't have the story and a map yet but see the Ships and the Aircrafts

(The current Naval Guns will be replaced in future,i'm planning the new naval guns but those guns you see are from Part Sheets.)

(And all ships,aircraft are made by me.)
(Please if the image not correct pls tell me ;)

Hope you all like ;)

Map:
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Ships:
BC:
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CV:
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Merchant Ship:
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Landing Ship:
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DD:
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Aircrafts WW2
Fighters:
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Torpedo Bomber:
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Bomber:
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Sea Plane:
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Jet Aircrafts 1943
Fighter:
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Bomber:
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Scout :| :
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HMS Sophia
Post subject: Re: Future AU (Planning)Posted: August 21st, 2011, 6:58 pm
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I really do not know where to start... Your ships need a huge amount of work. Just to take the first one, you dont have enough hull for your guns barbettes, especially the aft one. And there are many other problems.


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Biancini1995
Post subject: Re: Future AU (Planning)Posted: August 21st, 2011, 7:05 pm
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yes that are the my firsts ship i drawn and will be corrected by the time

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HMS Sophia
Post subject: Re: Future AU (Planning)Posted: August 21st, 2011, 7:08 pm
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Then start working hard. Why not post one at a time, then we can actually give you some critical advice without getting confused.


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Biancini1995
Post subject: Re: Future AU (Planning)Posted: August 22nd, 2011, 12:51 am
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OK i got the map now but the story will be a "little" dificult to creat,and some modifications on the ships will come.

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Post subject: Re: Future AU (Planning)Posted: August 22nd, 2011, 3:57 am
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Look, guys, there's a reason why we have a beginner's forum. That reason is not to point out "lol your ships suck try harder."

Biancini1995...don't take this the wrong way but it is somewhat difficult for me to pick an area that honestly would be a good starting point. I suggest you look at hull forms (take your pick from the database) and perhaps in the meantime work on your Navyfield ships some more (since they're based off of published material, we can give feedback more effectively).


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Post subject: Re: Future AU (Planning)Posted: August 22nd, 2011, 5:12 am
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Just to help: you need more draft(depth) to all your ships (except your merchant and landing ships), your Destroyer, Aircraft Carrier and the battleship have the wrong railings, the bilge keel (the thin strip like fin underneath the water needs to be much longer). I also suggest you revise the number of anchors on each ship

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Post subject: Re: Future AU (Planning)Posted: August 22nd, 2011, 12:53 pm
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ok but i can still only use 3 day per week

but anything about the map?liked or not?

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Post subject: Re: Future AU (Planning)Posted: August 22nd, 2011, 1:13 pm
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I have an issue with your map. If you look into the history quebec is actually only ever land 100 km north and south of the St. Lawrence River. The rest of the land was occupied First Nation and Inuit territory given to Canada as Rurpert Land. If quebec ever does separate, they would only be granted this the territory that they came into Canada with. The rest would be reclaimed by the First Nations and Inuit People. This is something the propaganda ministry of quebec never tell its citizens.


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Post subject: Re: Future AU (Planning)Posted: August 22nd, 2011, 3:05 pm
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Biancini1995 wrote:
ok but i can still only use 3 day per week
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