Anywho heres my latest edit:
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A few points:
You're a bit too heavy on the shading; a single darker shade would be enough.
You need to figure out how to make text without anti-aliasing. Just search this forum; it was discussed numerous times here somewhere.
Stick to the standard template (one of
these) and follow the directions written on them.
All in all I would suggest to draw a real ship first. And of course read the forum and study drawings from the archive.