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Post subject: Re: FD Scale Vehicles 7: The Easy Search ThreadPosted: January 9th, 2015, 7:10 pm
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Nice additions.

@Radome
Could You rework also FAP-2026 itself, please? :)
Because of that multiple-black lines and other technical issues I counted it so far as WiP (and not included to Main List nor saved for archive)

@Andrzei13
It's nice start, but I think it could be somewhat improved by working on details, removing some double-black pixels, adding contour on ground supporters (and putting it all on proper template).

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Post subject: Re: FD Scale Vehicles 7: The Easy Search ThreadPosted: January 9th, 2015, 8:10 pm
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My first work in FD scale - soviet quadruple ZPU-4 AA machinegun (14,5mm)[/URL]
Your drawing looks offscale as hell...
Try rescaling it again. Hope my Image Helps :)

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Post subject: Re: FD Scale Vehicles 7: The Easy Search ThreadPosted: January 10th, 2015, 12:36 pm
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@Radome
Thanks!

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Post subject: Re: FD Scale Vehicles 7: The Easy Search ThreadPosted: January 10th, 2015, 5:40 pm
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I had redone the ZPU with the help of your image.
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Post subject: Re: FD Scale Vehicles 7: The Easy Search ThreadPosted: January 10th, 2015, 5:48 pm
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I see a pixel haze around the wheels. Also we don't draw the "ground" (so the side supports should have bottom contour).
Contours should be all black - and they aren't and I urge You to work on the MG's which shouldn't be simply black blobs (and exhausts of barrels look like they were slightly bent upwards)

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Post subject: Re: FD Scale Vehicles 7: The Easy Search ThreadPosted: January 12th, 2015, 6:37 pm
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Thanks, I removed pixels around the wheels, KPV MG's are re-done. I improved the MG mount, too. What do you think?
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Post subject: Re: FD Scale Vehicles 7: The Easy Search ThreadPosted: January 12th, 2015, 6:39 pm
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Much better, though the "right" wheel is somewhat non-round on the top, and as for the MG's - we generally do our best to avoid black areas (double black lines etc.)

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Post subject: Re: FD Scale Vehicles 7: The Easy Search ThreadPosted: January 13th, 2015, 1:32 pm
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ZPU reworked.

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Post subject: Re: FD Scale Vehicles 7: The Easy Search ThreadPosted: February 2nd, 2015, 8:27 pm
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Welcome to the Shipbucket.
It's a very nice work, particularly for a starting one.

Btw. If - and I'm not saying You did, just if - You used any significant elements from anyone else's work (as we have few large MAZ TEL's already around) then the author of that drawing should be also credited.

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